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I am considering a rewrite of my novel, Timmy but I am having an issue with one part and I am hoping someone can help me with it.

In chapter nine, Timmy realizes that his dreams were indeed a memory and his parents were really murdered. He goes into a rage but is comforted by his friend, Jeff who manages to calm him down.

I am considering changing that to Timmy running to Grandma Pizano who offers him the comfort and a warm bed. She takes him back to the theater to gather his belongings the following day but find that the actress, Stephanie needs his help one last time, leading up to his capture.

Only this time, Grandma Pizano is in on the search for Timmy along with all the people he had helped during his four years basically living alone.

What do you guys think?
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I am a child at heart who reads and writes for fun. Images give me ideas for future stories, posted on Writing.com.
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Almerious Apr 1, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Thanks so much for watching me Eric! :iconsnugplz:
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Unseenivy253 Mar 7, 2014   General Artist
thank you for the fav!!!
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IdiotTwins Mar 3, 2014  Student General Artist
Thank you for the +fave :iconasdfghplz:
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murriwurri Jan 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks a lot for the watch :)
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You are welcome.:) (Smile) 
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KunYKA Jan 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you
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You are welcome.
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