I am considering a rewrite of my novel, Timmy but I am having an issue with one part and I am hoping someone can help me with it.
In chapter nine, Timmy realizes that his dreams were indeed a memory and his parents were really murdered. He goes into a rage but is comforted by his friend, Jeff who manages to calm him down.
I am considering changing that to Timmy running to Grandma Pizano who offers him the comfort and a warm bed. She takes him back to the theater to gather his belongings the following day but find that the actress, Stephanie needs his help one last time, leading up to his capture.
Only this time, Grandma Pizano is in on the search for Timmy along with all the people he had helped during his four years basically living alone.
What do you guys think?